Wonders of Wonders IV

Hey "Avid" here is part of a story I'm writing, the first part anyway. Let me know what you think-Lia

The Atlantian Bride Pt 1

(A story from the Pirates of the Caribbean)

  The Atlantian Bride was owned by the Fidelity Ship Liners a company located on the Ilse of the West, in the Ayrisan Sea. Her crew was led by Captain Efayrin Lionheart (the first piratess on the Ilse of the West). It was a stormy day at the City of Carlyn, the Atlantian Bride had just returned from a cargo run to Riventown; her crew was at the Unicorns Tavern, celebrating another safe voyage. 

“A toast to Captain Efayrin Lionheart!”  

Skipper said “for proving once again who the mistress of the seas really is!” 

“Aye!” all those in the tavern shouted lifting their ales to the young piratess.

 “Long live the Pirate Lords!” Efayrin said standing up and raising her ale to her fellow sea raiders, “Long live the Pirate Lords!” they echoed back. 

Efayrin sat down, she felt her old comrade Will Iron’s gaze upon her 

“what?” she asked 

“oh nothing except the fact that you’re becoming quite a scallywag.” 

“As I should be," she replied "after all I am soon to be a legendary pirate lord, with a legendary crew.”  

“True and not true” he said 

“what do you mean by that?” she asks.

“what Will meant is that we still have a long way to go before we become legends.” 

Skipper and his twin Tagg Treaty chorus, 

“You got that right.” Charlie Maleth says “I’ll second that” Ivan Carrs says, “ditto” Percy Johnston adds.  

“Really boys have a little faith in yourselves we’ve made it this far!” Efayrin says looking pointedly at her friends

 “So we haven’t gone any raids yet big deal, we’re still the youngest and successful crew to get this far yet!” 

“And we proved that a thief, a pair of insufferable twins, a slow witted lad, an old one handed seadog veteran, and an orphan, could be one of the best hardworking, dangerous pirate crew like the rest of them!” Will states 

“Aye!” they all shout.      

Now around this time the Royal Navy was sailing out to capture and liberate any pirates caught breaking the law. Their commander was Sir Edward Weston, a man with a fierce hatred for pirates and magic alike. Sir Edward was looking out to the open sea before him and smiled for the pirate’s world was filled with chaos and soon their world would not exist and order would be restored. Yes he thought with a grim satisfaction, a world of order and peace……… and the pirates wouldn’t know what hit them. 

Submitted by Lia Seenauth of Whiteman MO.   Wonderful!  I never read a pirate story before, and was very intrigued by this.  Hope for more to come!